Wednesday, April 12, 2006

Part 2. Can you feel the suspense.

As I ran away I heard some one shout 'Hey you!' but I didn't turn around. When I finally stopped running I was four blocks away and had only stopped because that guy , now in a cop car, had pulled up.
"Miss, were you at that crime scene back there?" he said it like a question but I knew he knew that I'd been there.
"Yes." I said, puffing slightly.
"In that case you're gunna have to come with us." I noticed the agitated looking man in the car and making conversation asked:
"What's his matter?" His matter was, as it turns out, that he didn't like chaffeuring Detective Murphey, thats the guys name, around. As I sat in the back of the car I felt bad, people on the street were staring, wondering what I'd done to get myself in the back of a police car. But I really didn't care. Everything I cared about was gone.

TO BE CONTINUED... wait I lie! thats the end!!!!!!!! jj

1 comment:

Izak Flash Man said...

quote "But I really didn't care. Everything I cared about was gone." unquote, I like that.